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Reek

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Geonosis, our home,
is corrupted with these
lost souls staining our
sands of time with empty
blood.

One is pinned, one is
screaming for mercy,
but the strings of time
will not have this spilled
blood.

They call him the Skywalker,
but I hardly see him
using the air to deceive our
brothers in armor for
blood.

This war, this civility that calmed
this land years ago is now
stopped, and the only thing we
brothers think of is the taste of
blood.
115/365 - Reek

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Reek: a creature from Star Wars


Inspiration?: :meow: I had a nerd moment.
Who is this for?: STAR WARS NERDSSSS :yoda:
Why?: We have to stick together. OBVIOUSLY.
Who is in this?: The Reek!

:lmao: I am a geek.

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Nemonus's avatar
I wish this had more of a sense of the reek as an animal and an individual--that worked really well in the first couple stanzas, and then dropped off. But either way, it's a pretty nicely written poem from an interesting point of view. It certainly caught my attention.